Monday, April 20, 2009

okay my paragraph draft.

Rough Draft for Essay

Hawthorne uses descriptive diction to describe and highlight Hester’s appearance. The “gloss” on her hair brings out the image of a young woman. Words such as richness and impressiveness build her complex features like her brows and deep black eyes. This gives her a more alive and active look in her character. Yet, she also earned herself a “halo of misfortune and ignominy”, which is a result of a sin she has committed. Embroidered and illuminated was the Scarlet Letter she has received on her bosom, as a mark to remind her of her mistake. Hawthorne includes all of these descriptive words to portray and illustrate the transition from a young innocent beauty to a troubled one.

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