The Sims 3! :]

It comes out right after my birthday :]
so you know what to get me. HAHAHHAHAH!

ok, 2nd body paragraph [tone]

Also, Hawthorne continues to have a pitiful tone towards Hester. He mentions that Hester’s elegant character has been wiped away by the Scarlet letter. By doing so, he creates a tone of sympathy for her faded beauty. Hawthorne also contained a doubtful tone to whether Hester will be able to change back to her original self. Words such as “if” and “might” prove his unstable position about her. All of these focus on his tone with some negativity that emphasizes on Hester’s transformation during her time in crisis.


HELP!
i need some revising :[

okay my paragraph draft.

Rough Draft for Essay

Hawthorne uses descriptive diction to describe and highlight Hester’s appearance. The “gloss” on her hair brings out the image of a young woman. Words such as richness and impressiveness build her complex features like her brows and deep black eyes. This gives her a more alive and active look in her character. Yet, she also earned herself a “halo of misfortune and ignominy”, which is a result of a sin she has committed. Embroidered and illuminated was the Scarlet Letter she has received on her bosom, as a mark to remind her of her mistake. Hawthorne includes all of these descriptive words to portray and illustrate the transition from a young innocent beauty to a troubled one.

Weird Cold Tuesday,,

YES! It was a weird weather, very gloomy when I came outside
the building. And and and it looked like it was gonna rain, but it
didn't, Thank God! Strong winds gave me chills, and line 3 took
long to pick me up haha. I wish I can drive already! But anyways!
Got together w/ wsg gals and hung out and talked about how
we can improve our dancing w/ nobody and gee. It was real good,
hope all of us were there to practice though. But yeah, we ate some
mochi that was made by someone that no need to be mentioned. HAHA
it was pretty tasty. Coco, Nancy, Ana, and I stopped by Mitsuwa,
prices went up and it ain't cool man. We got some real nice
girl talk. Hehehehe, especially Coco and I talkin about our "FUTURE
PLANS" after high school! Goin to the Philippines y'know! I think it'd
be a fun !vacation! HAHAHA Nancy will be the only viet flipino.
ITS GEEEUT! haha. i'm home and tired and sleepy.
BUT NO! I have to do homework, its a daily thing but
procrastination kicks in sometimes. :[ so badd!!!
But i wish WSG will be able to perform tomorrow <3
please please please!
hehehe, the day after tomorrow I have a field trip!
WOOOOHOOOO! This week doesn't seem so bad at all :]
And my haircut on Saturday and medcor! WOOOHOOOOOO!
Ok I'm OUT! LATES!

-Cahla OG

i HATE schoool -.-

Seriously! It sucks even more when you come from spring
break! I didn't even touch any of my work, and now I'm
finishing them up for late work haha. Still it's something
right? Well, I'm also hopin' that WSG will be able to
perform this wednesday, it's so disappointing to hear
the news about our condition of our performance.
Pleasee godd i wish we'll get our spot, and show what
hard work and practice we've done! please please please.
toodles for now.
SCHOOOOL SUCKS , sometimes.